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Rude. Hospital.

Source date: 2020-12-221 min readComplete text

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[WP]A few weeks ago, you started to notice one peculiar person that you see every day that does the exact same things every day, down to the specific place and time. You decided to directly interfere with some of these details, like standing in his way to make him late, to see what would happen.
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THE MOMENT

[poem] [ Rude. Hospital.]

Day after day every day.

Six sugars, three creams

Drinks his coffee the same way

He sits and doodles and schemes.

Then he stands at 9 on the dot.

He grabs his coffee and pad.

He's out the door by 9:01

Curiosity struck me bad.

"What if he left at 9:02, not one?"

"I could block him," I thought.

"What's the worst that could happen?"

"He's late a few minutes, five or ten."

"It was worse than that.

He wasn't late; didn't slow at all.

But here I am. In the hospital."

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